Midterm – Close Reading

Karina Garcia

Jessica Pressman

ECL 305

31 March 2024

‘The Little Mermaid’

The Little Mermaid’s determination to convert from mermaid to human reflects the similar qualities that should be expected to be found in humans, which slowly erases the barrier that differentiates who and what is human and nonhuman. Andersen conveys the message of determination by presenting the obstacles that were put before the Little Mermaid as she was trying to convert her fishtail into a pair of human legs and to obtain an immortal soul, thus making her a powerful sea creature who allows humanistic traits like determination to guide her life decisions. This is significant as it develops equality for nonhumans by not only showing the trait of determination but by also showing the humanistic traits they possess that humans are only expected to have. 

One of the first circumstances in which the Little Mermaid begins her longing is when she states, “I will venture everything to win him and to obtain an immortal soul… I will go to the sea-witch, who has always frightened me hitherto, but now, perhaps, she can advise and help me.” (Andersen, 119). There is already her initial longing of wanting to join the prince again as he is all that she thinks about in her days, but she seeks to go to the extent of the sea witch for solutions. Although the sea witch had “frightened” her, the Little Mermaid was able to put aside all her fear and commit to going to the sea witch as she knew that the sea witch would be the answer to all her problems. In this small passage there is a slight revealing of the Little Mermaid’s determination, in which despite the fear she felt from the sea witch she was still going to find her because she knew that in any sort of way she would be reunited with the prince on land. 

As the Little Mermaid had set her mind to finding the sea witch, it was now time to follow through and physically go to her “turf-common” (Andersen, 120). In the area of the sea witch is a dead area in which nothing grew and was lifeless which was the complete opposite compared to the area that the Little Mermaid lived in, and something specific that she had to overcome were polypi which are “half animal, half plant” (Andersen, 120). The Little Mermaid was fearful of passing through this as the polypi made up the trees and bushes and had the ability to grab onto any and everything that passed by them and due to this she grew fear but then reminded herself of her main goal, “…but then she thought of the prince, and of the soul that human beings possessed, and she took courage.” (Andersen, 120). The fear she had about physically reaching the sea witch because of the polypi almost stopped her but she allowed herself a few seconds and overcame this physical obstacle. As the polypi had almost prevented the Little Mermaid from reaching the sea witch, she reminded herself of why she needed to meet with the sea witch and this allowed her sense of bravery to grow more from this obstacle. 

Finally, after the sea witch had warned her about the repercussions of this potion, “…it will hurt you as much as if a sharp sword were thrust through you” (Andersen, 121), it was a huge warning about that the physical pain she will have to endure as long as she’s on land. The Little Mermaid had been forewarned warned and through the language of “sharp sword” it demonstrates the pain from fish tail to legs, and in this section there could’ve been an easy resistance and declined the offer but instead the Little Mermaid’s response to the sea witch was accepting of all that came with this deal, “I do,” said the little mermaid, in a trembling voice, as she thought of the prince and of an immortal soul.” (Andersen, 121). As the Little Mermaid had the choice to pick if she wanted to continue with this deal or not, she had reminded herself again of her own personal goal and knew what exactly she had to endure and also overcome if it meant to be on land. 

Through the Little Mermaid as the main character in this story there was more of a diminution of the barrier that separates human and nonhuman, thus advocating for equality for the nonhuman. The Little Mermaid was able to prove her determination by the challenges that came towards her but never resisted and instead pushed forward with her ultimate goal. Within these challenges as well, she showed other humanistic traits like bravery and courage, and these are traits that can be applied to only human beings and not the non. The Little Mermaid proved herself to hold humanistic traits and to be a powerful sea creature as she willingly left her entire life behind to start completely from scratch as she believed it was her calling. The story of the Little Mermaid is one that continues to show the equality for the nonhuman through the use of her own personal challenges, and everything she overcame to be human while demonstrating humanistic traits. 

Revised Midterm Close Reading

Thavanh Pais

ECL 305

31 March 2024

The Romance of the Faery Melusine

The Faery at the Fountain’

In ‘The Romance of the Faery Melusine,’ the story revolves around a critical encounter between Melusine and Raymond as he visits a hidden fountain. This passage not only progresses the plot, but it also goes into deeper themes and character dynamics, providing insight into the complexity of the supernatural world and its relationship to human affairs.  In Chapter 3, titled ‘The Faery at the Fountain,’ the depiction of Raymond’s reiterated promise to Melusine symbolizes the delicate balance between trust and curiosity, highlighting the theme of secrecy within their relationship. Through Raymond’s oath to refrain from prying into Melusine’s mysterious absences, the text subtly explores the vulnerability inherent in maintaining secrets, particularly in the context of their intermingling human and supernatural realms. This pivotal moment not only underscores the consequences of transgression but also delves into the intricate dynamics of trust and curiosity within the relationship between Raymond and Melusine.

At the core of the scenario is Raymond’s solemn oath to Melusine, in which he promises, “On my life, I swear that never on that evening or that night will I do anything that might be to your detriment, and that I will, in all goodwill and honor, seek to know nothing about your absence.” This declaration, filled with intensity and gravity, demonstrates the delicate balance of trust and inquiry in their relationship. The repetition of terms like “on my life” and “in all goodwill and honor” emphasize Raymond’s sincerity and seriousness, as well as his deep concern for Melusine. However, it is critical to understand Melusine’s motivations for requesting Raymond’s commitment, as her request is based on her own vulnerabilities. Melusine seeks isolation to reconcile her dual existence and confront the intricacies of her magical nature. Her desire for Raymond’s commitment protects her autonomy and gives her the opportunity to retire into seclusion when necessary, without fear of interference or criticism.

Furthermore, Raymond’s promise not to inquire into Melusine’s absences highlights the idea of secrecy that pervades their encounters. Raymond’s decision to keep his promise sets off a series of events that would eventually change the course of their relationship and the lives of people around them. His commitment to resist the temptation to unravel Melusine’s mysteries underscores the value of integrity and self-control, highlighting the transformative power of moral decisions in shaping one’s destiny. 

Melusine’s reaction to Raymond’s pledge reveals the complexities of her personality as well as the mental struggle she experiences as a result of her magical background. While Melusine appreciates Raymond’s promise to keep her secrets, she is painfully aware of the dangers of disclosing her true identity. The exchange between Raymond and Melusine at the fountain is a microcosm of the larger themes woven throughout the story, capturing the tension between intimacy and autonomy and illuminating the complexities of navigating interpersonal relationships in a world fraught with secrecy and uncertainty. A thorough assessment of their contact reveals the nuances of trust and curiosity, as well as the great emotional resonance of their bond. The fountain is loaded with symbolic importance as a place of encounter and revelation, and emerges as a focal point for exploring the complexities of human connection and the transformative power of love.

Her request for Raymond’s promise could be interpreted as a means of creating a safe space for introspection and self-discovery, away from the pressures and distractions of the outside world. Melusine’s need for seclusion may be related to her desire for independence and self-reliance. Melusine, despite her emotional connection to Raymond and desire to engage in a relationship with him, is likely to value her independence and autonomy as a siren Her request for Raymond’s pledge allows her to assert her boundaries and autonomy in their relationship, ensuring that she has control over her own time and space.

In conclusion, “The Romance of the Faery Melusine” weaves a captivating narrative that explores a variety of themes and character dynamics, with the pivotal encounter between Melusine and Raymond at the hidden fountain in Chapter 3 standing out as the centerpiece. This scene not only progresses the plot but also explores deeper topics, including the difficult balance between trust and curiosity, as well as the theme of concealment in their relationship. Raymond’s solemn commitment to keep from inquiring into Melusine’s strange absences emphasizes the implications of transgression and digs into the complex dynamics of trust and curiosity between them. Equally important is Melusine’s appeal for Raymond’s pledge, which reflects her yearning for autonomy and independence. Her need for isolation is clear, as she seeks a safe haven for introspection and self-discovery away from the constraints and judgments of the outside world. The discussion between them by the fountain captures the tension between intimacy and autonomy, providing a powerful depiction of the complexity of negotiating human relationships in the midst of concealment and ambiguity.

“The Great Old Hunter” and Evil Nature

Humanity’s connection to the natural world has always been complicated. On the one hand, people make significant efforts to protect and regenerate natural ecosystems and resources. On the other hand, several of humankind’s advances toward technological progress and solidifying its spot on top of the food chain have resulted in the displacement and extinction of hundreds of species throughout humankind’s comparatively brief rule over Earth. It may seem that a steady population increase and a strong dependence on an industrialized lifestyle are the primary reasons humans have had such a negative influence on the environment. Still, it might be more significant than that. In a chapter of The Romance of the Faery Melusine titled “The Great Old Hunter,” a depiction of man’s ideals implies that humanity’s connection with nature is influenced by a desire to demonstrate supremacy.

The story points out that, in the time of the Great Hunter, Aimery, humans and nature lived close together. The chapter describes nature as a sort of hidden threat, stating, “In hamlets and villages wild animals in their lairs could watch unseen all that went on around human dwellings” (Lebey and Knight 11). The wording in this sentence gives off the impression that humanity was surrounded by nature in an almost malevolent way. This notion of impending violence is further supported by the next sentence, “Foxes and wolves knew just when to raid” (Lebey and Knight 11). In this section of the story, humans feel more like the wildlife, while animals seem to be the hunters. It shows us that humans were fearful of their bestial neighbors. In describing the aftermath of one of these canine raids, the author makes a direct reference to the Devil, writing, “A strange wild smell, something like sulphur, hung in the frozen air, stinging the nostrils, as in a room where a fire, smoking before going out, has left a scorched smell like He of the cloven hoof” (Lebey and Knight 11). Cloven hooves are found in animals like sheep, deer, and goats. The personal pronoun “He” infers that these cloven hooves belong to a human, as any other reference to nature is met with the pronouns “they,” “them,” and “it”. All this suggests that this simile is an easily understood comparison between nature and the Devil. This just further proves that humanity was scared of nature, and it helps justify their rationale for hunting.

The forest itself is described as “…stretched beyond, menacing and dangerous, full of the unknown, concealing the surprising and the supernatural” (Lebey and Knight 11). Describing the forest as “stretched beyond” gives the audience a good idea of how surrounded early humans felt. The word “beyond” suggests that the forest’s reach had no visible end. It’s hard not to imagine a raft in the middle of an endless ocean. Both the hypothetical raft and the aforementioned hamlets and villages are stranded, encircled by a not-so-obvious danger. The audience knows that the forest is dangerous because the first two paragraphs describe the animals who come from the woods to terrorize people – but also because the text uses the words “menacing and dangerous” to personify the woods. Writing that the forest is “full of the unknown” is important, as the word “unknown” will be repeated later in the text to explain what drives Man to be brave. To say that the forest conceals “the supernatural” indicates that not only is nature frightening to humankind, but it is almost incomprehensible – it doesn’t follow humanity’s rules; therefore, it is mystical and fantastical.

The story then shows us that humanity is able to defeat these evils – the story says, “…evil reigned only if heroes failed to confront its dangers” (Lebey and Knight 12). This sentence reveals a lot of information to the audience about humanity’s values. Saying that “evil reigned” strengthens the prior implications of mankind’s stranded identity. To reign over something is to predominantly rule something. The idea of nature (AKA evil) predominantly ruling over the world is an alien concept to modern humans, as the tables seemingly turned millennia ago. The text continues, stating, “It seemed that the one existed to give rise to the other,” (Lebey and Knight 12). The nonspecific nature of this sentence fragment is purposeful. Its obvious implication is that evil exists to make humans stronger, but it also implies that the existence of humans makes the surrounding evil more powerful. This one fragment opens up the possibility of an infinite cycle where humanity and nature progressively become more and more impactful on each other. With melting ice caps and other adverse effects of climate change, it’s safe to say that this relationship between man and the natural world is still in effect. The sentence ends by saying, “for humans do not show their mettle if left to themselves.” (Lebey and Knight 12). A rough translation into simpler terms would be that humans do not show their tenacity if there is no evil to brave against. 

The word “unknown” returns in the sentence, “In those days men identified with things that could lead them further into the unknown;” (Lebey and Knight 12). The last time the word “unknown” was used, it described the “menacing and dangerous” essence of the forest. Using a phrase as vague as “the unknown” in this sentence works great; it describes that humanity has an instinctual fascination with things it does not understand, as well as further exploring humanity’s association with forests and nature in particular. The story continues with, “they sought in all directions the extension of their physical and spiritual power” (Lebey and Knight 12). It seems humans have always been determined to take over everything, as demonstrated by the phrase “in all directions.” The sentence mentions both physical and spiritual power, and this is like saying violence and understanding. The order in the wording is crucial to understanding the implicit attitude humans have towards the unknown – destroy first, understand later. Since nature is akin to evil in this story, it would be fair to think that these early humans would try to defeat nature before they try to observe and reason with it.

All this is not to say that Man never tried to understand nature; in the next paragraph, the narrator says, “Man developed without dissociating or abstracting himself from the world,” (Lebey and Knight 12). When one dissociates or abstracts oneself, one removes oneself from one’s own existence and lets go of any attachments that are associated with one’s sense of identity. This remark demonstrates to the audience that whatever information that humans have accumulated about nature has been done so on a level that is ultimately trivial. If one wants to have a complete understanding of anything, one must put oneself in that thing’s position and make an effort to see the world from the perspective of that thing. In the absence of the dissociation and abstraction processes, no attempt is made to fully understand anything. 

Finally, the narrator discusses hunting, saying, “Hunting, so different from our own… maintained the extension of human power” (Lebey and Knight 12). To get better at killing something, one must learn its behaviors and use them to one’s advantage. This is the “spiritual” power mentioned before. Through hunting, people can demonstrate their spiritual power through the act of tracking and the use of animal calls. The kill itself is the obvious demonstration of the physical power humans crave. This sentence paints hunting as a necessary activity for humans to partake in to maintain balance in the natural world – but it seems like hunting is necessary to keep human beings secure in themselves, which is a lot less valiant than the former.

In conclusion, “The Great Old Hunter” illuminates the intricate dance between humanity and the natural world, revealing a timeless struggle for supremacy. The text suggests that humans understand nature as evil, but humanity’s view of the wild seems to be a lot more positive in the contemporary era. If the ideals presented by the text were widespread, then this could explain why humans still tend to negatively impact the natural world. But it’s important to remember that the relationship between Man and nature is complex and changes over time. Stories from the past like this one teach about how people thought and felt in earlier times, but they also make us consider how humans think and act now when it comes to the environment. In order to try to solve the environmental problems of today, it’s important to understand how complicated our relationship with nature is and work toward a peaceful union that respects both humans and the environment. Understanding where we fit in the environment as a whole is important, should we want to face the difficulties of the future with knowledge and kindness.

Odysseus and His Relatable Acceptance

Rigo De Leon

ECL 305

Professor Pressman

March 3rd, 2024

For many people, writing is an outlet to convey emotions and gives writers the opportunity to combine their subconscious thoughts with their creativity. Reading stories that were written centuries ago gives readers the opportunity to see what the writer was going through at the time through the wording of their sentences, the imagery they choose to provide, and messages they leave for readers. By studying “Odysseus and the Sirens” which is a chapter in Homer’s “Odyssey”, Odysseus becomes infatuated with the siren song, and professes that he will tie himself to his ship, and be the only one in his crew to refrain from protecting his ears. Odysseus speaks in the form of a poem, which gives the reader a much better understanding of what he is going through, and also gives the reader the opportunity to relate to him by the way he conveys his feelings. As he is facing death, this passage hints at the idea that Odysseus is overcome with existential wonder that he shares with humanity as he enters the opening moments of the experience he has been longing for for years. The demonic imagery induces fear in Odysseus, but this is counteracted by the calming personification of the ocean, which leaves Odysseus with a relatable feeling of acceptance to whatever his fate may be.

The conflicting imagery in this passage is extremely important because it gives an idea as to how unsure Odysseus is made to feel in that moment. His initial reaction to meeting the Sirens makes him recall how the “waves below, at once forgot to move. Some demon calm’d the air and smooth’d the deep, Hush’d the loud winds, and charm’d the waves to sleep.” (43). The text makes it clear that through all the impending chaos, he is able to take in the nature around him as a natural coping mechanism. In reality, this may have only induced more fear in him. Such calmness caused by what he believes to be evil creatures juxtaposes what humans are conditioned to believe should happen when faced with danger. Did Odysseus see massive waves that threatened the safety of the boat? Did he see large, brainless brutes that could rip him apart? No. He experienced tranquility in his environment. The passage breaks down an experience that most people can relate to, that being the moment where people lose all power, and can do absolutely nothing but accept whatever fate is in store.

Odysseus has lived his life believing that these beautiful creatures are ultimately demonic and deadly, yet he is still willing to try to outsmart them in order to hear their song, which could prove to be fatal to not only him but his entire crew. By asking for only he “alone, with fetters firmly bound, The gods allow to hear the dangerous sound” (41). Odysseus emits a natural human response by sacrificing safety for the sake of honoring his desire of knowledge. Sacrifice is a very normal aspect to humanity, especially when curiosity consumes people. Odysseus proclaims that the gods will let him hear what he desires to hear. This is important to the rest of the story because it shows that Odysseus believes in a higher power. Given that this was written before the beginning of Christianity, it not only predicts how people behave once Christianity is brought to life, but it also proves that fate and a belief in a higher power is a principle that has existed throughout the existence of humanity. People find themselves closest to a higher power when experiencing a life threatening event. By mentioning the fetters, which are essentially chains that are restraining him, he is displaying a sense of hope that he will survive this encounter with the Sirens. Odysseus portrays a longing for wisdom and excitement, yet he is granted the knowledge that is needed for a chance to survive. People act similarly in the modern age in forms such as adrenaline rushes. There are people who risk their lives jumping out of planes, surviving in the woods alone, or deep sea diving who search for enticing experiences for the sake of pleasure. Similarly to Odysseus, the people that crave adrenaline accept their fates in order to slightly scratch the large itch that is meant to satisfy existential wonder.

As Odysseus prepares to encounter the Sirens, he further shows his animalistic wonder by making an effort to cover the ears of his crew. With “every sail [they] furl, each oar [they] ply; Lash’d by the stroke, the frothy waters fly. The ductile wax, with busy hands” Odysseus molds. The effort that is put into preparation for their encounter is treated like a space mission: Both require a lot of thought and knowledge, both are extremely dangerous, and both are not completely necessary. The world is big enough to provide those with the necessities they need. Despite people being programmed to value their lives, they have beat the natural world by being conscious enough to fight their primal instincts of survival for the sake of desire. Through his writings, Homer unintentionally shows us that human instincts have not changed from how they were thousands of years ago.

When Odysseus finally encounters the Sirens, they make an effort to make him succumb to his temptations. The Sirens sing their beautiful song, but instead of providing direct knowledge and wisdom, they use their voices to “instruct the soul, and charm the ear.” If Odysseus chooses to “Approach, [his] soul will shall into raptures rise” (43). Resisting temptation is a completely unnatural human response to a situation. Temptation is a concept that was constructed along with religion and society. Fighting temptation is what separates humans from animals, as humans are able to come together and think not only for themselves, but for those around them as well. Odysseus uses all of his strength to resist the urge to join the Sirens. 

One of the most impactful aspects of this story is the fact that the readers do not get to find out how Odysseus felt about the Siren song. The story ends abruptly after they simply sail past the Sirens. The readers should see this and rethink what the point of the entire text was. Homer leads people to believe that there will be a rewarding payoff to all of Odysseus’ work and desire. Instead, readers spend time learning about Odysseus’s battle against temptation. One could look at this and relate it to an experience they could have where the struggle of completing a task completely overshadows the feeling of success or satisfaction that they expected. Through Odysseus’ poem, he provides a relatable experience that can be related to universally, where he honors desire beyond what he knows is right, despite being at the hands of death.

Midterm/ Essay Analysis: The Legend of Sedna the Sea Goddess

At first glance, “ The Legend of Sedna the Sea Goddess” appears to be a cautionary tale which warns about the consequences of deviating from the traditional norms of marriage. Sedna didn’t want to marry and when she finally does she is betrayed and ends up with the “ head and torso of a woman and the tail of a fish.” Yet, upon deeper analysis, the story allows for the exploration of Inuit culture through the hybrid body of Sedna in order to explore what this story entails about Inuits’ relationship to sacrifice, spirituality, and nature. 

To start, Sedna allows for the exploration of sacrifice in Inuits culture. Fearing the unsteady nature of their kayak during a storm, Sedna’s father makes the choice to sever her fingers, joint by joint. On one hand, it symbolizes the sacrifice made to restore equilibrium to the kayak, emphasizing the immediate need for balance in the face of danger. However, the story takes a turn as each severed finger transforms into sea creatures like “fish, seals, walruses, and whales,” Sedna’s sacrifice ultimately becomes a resource for the entire Inuit community and she beholds the power over them. The emergence of varied sea creatures therefore shows that sacrifices, no matter how painful, contribute to the balance of nature and the prosperity of the community. 

In addition, Spirituality is a crucial part of Inuit culture that is further explored through Sedna. After being thrown from the kayak, Sedna is described as having transformed into a spirit, “Sedna sank to the bottom of the ocean and there became a powerful spirit.” In this sense, spirits transcend life and are depicted as something eternal. They believe this spirit has power over the animals in the sea which is an important resource to them. This goes to show how strong their belief in spiritual powers are. Their belief in this spirit is so deep that they even have taboos they follow to show their respect for her, like “when a seal is killed it must be given a drink of fresh water, not salt water” giving the seal fresh water adds to this respect and the appreciation of the sacrifice of the seals life. To add onto this, it is said that “ If the hunters do not catch anything for a long time, the Shaman will transform himself into a fish” and “appease Sedna.” The idea that the Shaman can transform themselves to meet Sedna in the case she becomes upset and their access to sea creatures becomes threatened, strengthens the belief that having a good spirit and following taboos and rituals are crucial and can affect the balance of nature. 

Furthermore, the harmonious relationship that the Inuit have with Sedna serves as a reflection of the relationship they have with nature, specifically with the sea. As detailed in the story, “The Inuit who rely on these animals want to maintain a good relationship with Sedna, so that she will continue to allow her animals to make themselves available to the hunters.” Since Sedna is what stands in between the Inuits and their access to the sea creatures, a harmonious relationship is important. The sea creatures Sedna controls is a crucial resource to Inuit hunters as it provides them with “food, clothes, and shelter.” As mentioned in the previous paragraph, the Shaman transforms themselves to make Sedna happy which is interesting and adds to the relationship between the Inuit and nature, “ The Shaman will comb the tangles out of Sedna’s hair and put it into braids.” Rather than approaching Sedna with fear, the Inuit have respect, nurturing, and care for her. On the same note, this also depicts the Inuits relationship to the sea and how they don’t exploit it for its resources but instead appreciate it and have gratitude. 

Overall,  “ The Legend of Sedna the Sea Goddess” transcends its initial appearance as a cautionary tale and becomes an in-depth examination of Inuit culture, particularly when it comes to sacrifice, spirituality, and nature. Sednas sacrifice reinforces the Inuits belief that sacrifice can contribute to the greater good, spirituality shows how a good spirit can have an influence towards the natural world, and the Inuits harmonic relationship with Sedna embodies their relationship with nature. 

Works Cited

Lindeman, Lenore. “The Legend of Sedna the Sea Goddess.” Sedna or Sanna the Sea Goddess of the Inuit, www.palomar.edu/users/scrouthamel/ais100/sedna.htm. Accessed 1 Mar. 2024.